Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Free Write

1. I feel like my writing is not as good as some people in this class

2. That people will make fun of my writing, or they will say that I'm a horrible writer

3. That people will like my writing, and they will try to help my writing

4. The class will laugh at my writing, or talk behind my back and say that I'm a horrible writer

Thursday, January 6, 2011

Strength's and Weakness on Essay

My Weakness:
- Struggling to stick with arguements
- Show a lot of info, but not arguements
- Don't connect facts with arguement
- Paragraph organization
- Don't connect info with source
- Squash a lot of info into one paragraph


My Strength's:
- Good thesis
- Have a lot of info
- Have a good ideas don't pull them together
- Try to show arguements